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Drabble: Climb the Mountain

An exact, 100 word drabble written for IYhed.    Naughtier than usual for me.  IK, of course.  Intimate, not long married people's banter.


Climb the Mountain



InuYasha  lay there, covered only with his white kosode draped across his middle.  His eyes were dark and smoldering as he looked at Kagome who sat next to him, wearing nothing at all.  He liked how the lamp light accented her curves.  The center of the kosode tented impressively in his appreciation.

“Oniyama,” she said.  “You call him ogre mountain?”

He smirked at her, a long, slow wanton look.  She blushed for some reason under his amber gaze, and could feel her body tingling as he inspected her. 

“That’s right,” he said.  “Wanna climb the mountain and meet the oni?”

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salomesensei
Sep. 22nd, 2009 02:31 am (UTC)
I found this a very sweet way to approach the naughty prompt. And I liked your nickname for it too.
knittingknots
Sep. 22nd, 2009 03:28 am (UTC)
Took me some thinking; I wanted it to be something within canon Inu's world view...and then it dawned on me....LOL.

Glad you like!

As for the next prompt, I think that one's just a little too out of my canon world to play with. Keep trying to think of something else that wants me to write it, and I get glimmers of crackfic, but nothing's settling in. Doesn't help that I'm involved in a 72 hour battle with a dragon that will wreak havoc on my character in one of the FB games...That kind of took priority until the monster's dead...It'll be a long time before I summon one of them critters again...
kiramaru7
Sep. 22nd, 2009 03:44 am (UTC)
That was cute, KK! I really liked the name Inuyasha came up for his naughty bits. ;p
knittingknots
Sep. 22nd, 2009 11:46 pm (UTC)
Why thank you ma'am...it took me almost a week to come up with something for him to call it that would fit in my story universe...but once I had that, it was rather fun to write!
kiramaru7
Sep. 22nd, 2009 11:48 pm (UTC)
You're welcome! :D It's the perfect name!
landofthekwt
Sep. 22nd, 2009 03:58 am (UTC)
You do have the ability to make naughty seem sweet.
oishii_fic
Sep. 22nd, 2009 08:09 pm (UTC)
She so does. Sneaky, classy woman.
knittingknots
Sep. 22nd, 2009 11:44 pm (UTC)
Sneaky am I? LOL....I like that image, for some reason....
knittingknots
Sep. 22nd, 2009 11:45 pm (UTC)
Naughty may be in the context...
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