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Oneshot: Buckets

IK stuff.  Written for the SFX Challenge at First Tweak, for the sfx zah, referring to dramatic entrance


Kagome knew exactly how many steps it was from the stream to where she had her laundry tub sitting in the shade of the old oak tree.  One hundred and forty-three steps.  She stopped at step seventy-four, and rested the buckets on the ground, relieving  the weight in her hands and the pressure of the  rope handles cutting into her hands.  The day was sunny and hot, and perfect for doing laundry.  Taking a deep breath, she then blew out a puff of air at a stray piece of hair tickling her nose.  This was her third trip from the stream.  Not for the first time, she wished she had gotten InuYasha to clear a place where she could wash at the stream side, but the ground there wasn’t good for it.   If InuYasha had been home, he would have filled the tub for her but he was out with Miroku, and she didn’t expect him home until the next day.  The laundry, though, was piling up and she couldn’t wait any longer to get this nasty chore out of the way.

Resolutely, she picked up the buckets again, and started counting steps.  “Eighty-one,” she muttered.  “Eighty-two . . . ” The path rounded the corner around a huge, ancient cherry tree.  “Eighty-nine, ninety . . . ”

Just as she turned the bend, suddenly there was a flash of red and white dropping from the tree onto the ground right immediately in front of her.

“Ack!” she cried, as she stepped back, trying to keep her toes from being stepped on, but as she moved, her ankle turned on a rock.  She lost her balance and  the water buckets splashed all over her.

“Kagome!”  InuYasha said, rushing to her side.  He bent over her and lifted her back to her feet. “I’m so sorry, Koibito.  We just got back, and I wanted to surprise you. Are you ok?”

She hugged him, then took a step.  “Maybe.  Way to make an entrance, husband.” 

Looking down at the state of her clothes, she sighed at the dirt and water all over her. She kissed him quickly on the chin and tried to smile.  “I’m really glad you’re back.  Finish filling up the laundry tub for me, will you?  I can see I just have a few more things to add to the wash basket.”

And with that, she walked gingerly back into the house.



( 8 comments — Leave a comment )
Jul. 28th, 2009 09:03 pm (UTC)
Love it! Poor Kagome - but hey, Inu got there right in time! Put a big, well- neede smile on face (but your stories always do that!) :D
Jul. 28th, 2009 10:51 pm (UTC)
Awe... Poor Kagome. XD

How'd you do with one at the comm? Well, I hope! ;D
Jul. 28th, 2009 11:05 pm (UTC)
Didn't place...but that's life....LOL...
Jul. 28th, 2009 11:07 pm (UTC)
*huggles* I'm sorry to hear that. You're an awesome writer & I'm really surprised.*huggles*
Jul. 28th, 2009 11:18 pm (UTC)
Is ok...I enjoyed writing it, and now it's on FF...where I've gotten some interesting comments on it already!
Jul. 28th, 2009 11:19 pm (UTC)
Okay. Sweet!! Peopel do like it besides me! ;D
Jul. 29th, 2009 02:42 am (UTC)
Enjoyed this a lot. Shows just what a hard life Kagome really has and what she gave up to be with Inuyasha.
Jul. 29th, 2009 03:16 am (UTC)
I think I actually felt a pang in my ankle when she fell. I'm not joking.

This was cute, and Kagome is forgiving. And InuYasha, as always, is sweet in only the manly sweet way he can be. ^_^
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