Again, non IK...and Poetry Muse still seems to be in a funk! LOL. But I think she got into the interweaving of repetitive lines with action in this one...the rhythm beat through my head like a drumbeat...
that reorganizing Mama's kitchen cabinets without Mama's active participation will ALWAYS make Mama see red.....
........without sounding like a PMSing bitch?
I was not successful in avoiding that tone.
Yeah, I know it's currently not well organized, but damn it, it's MY mess, and I know where everything is. And if Dad crams stuff in the wrong place and messes up my order, at least the both of us know where things are at, which is the biggest reason why it's a mess. And I DO NOT feel like being Martha Stewart today. And I don't care if it's not pretty. I just don't want to deal with it NOW.