June 21st, 2009

drabble fairy

Poem: By the Water (2 Versions)

Version 1: This is written in a form called a bref double, but my scansion is probably too shaky to pull it off to its best effect. Ah well Maybe I'll give it another try someday when I have a stronger rhythm running through my head. But I really like the last two lines

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Version 2 - I redid this as a free verse poem, which I think I like better, maybe: 

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