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Going Quietly Mad

Water, water, everywhere,
nor any drop to drink. -- Coleridge

Been sitting on 3 spoilers for chapter 555. since last night and still untranslated by anything better than babelfish, and going crazy.  A true plethora of riches.  I put the Japanese for the longest, most complete one under the cut so I can share my insanity....

冥道の中でかごめを探す犬
かごめを探す家族たちの声が聞こえます
「おれが必ず探し出す」と言って更に奥へ進む犬

一方かごめは、四魂の玉と共に居ます

玉「おまえはずっとここにいた
  あれは、おまえがみた幻
  あの世界に戻りたいか…?
  ならば 願え!この四魂の玉に。
  あの世界に帰りたいと願え。
  さもなくば おまえは――
  この闇の中…永遠に…ひとり―――」

場面変わって、犬は妖怪と戦っています
妖怪は言います

妖怪「かごめは闇の恐怖に負け…
    必ず玉に願う。
    助かりたいと。」
犬「四魂の玉は…まだ 生きてるのか?」
妖怪「気づかんのか半妖…
    きさまがいるこの場は… 四魂の玉の中だ。
    そして 助かりたいと玉に願ったかごめが行く先は――
    ここだ。
    この四魂の玉の中でかごめは永遠に、
    われらと戦い続ける事となる。
    四魂の玉が滅びる事は決してない。
    玉の中で戦いは続き、
    また次の世 何者かの手に渡りあさましい願いとともに生き――」

永遠に繰り返す。
因縁は 断ち切れない。

犬「かごめ負けるな!
  おれが行くまで待ってろ!」

泣いている後姿のかごめで

おわり

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(Anonymous)
May. 25th, 2008 07:14 pm (UTC)
I can read japanese pretty well...but lets see....Im not really goos with sentence structures....but maybeIf I spend lik 5 hours on translating this it can probably be pretty understandable...lolz
knittingknots
May. 25th, 2008 07:43 pm (UTC)
I had the gist of it down...but not the nuancing. I put a darker spin on it (cause I'm still too novice at it, but Patches came to the rescue).


Translation came out:

Inuyasha is looking for Kagome in the meidou. He hears the voices of Kagome's family searching for her.
"I'll definitely find her," he says as he advances further inside.

Elsewhere, Kagome is with the Shikon no Tama.
Jewel: "You were here the entire time. What you saw was an illusion. Do you wish to return to that world...? If so, wish it. On this Shikon no Tama. Wish to return to that world. Otherwise, you will remain in this darkness... forever... alone..."

The scene changes, and Inuyasha is fighting some youkai. The youkai speak
youkai: "Kagome will lose to the darkness, and wish on the jewel. She will wish to save herself."
Inuyasha: "The Shikon no Tama... is still alive?!"
youkai: "Have you not realized, hanyou? The place you are right now... is the interior of the Shikon no Tama. And the location of Kagome, who would wish to save herself with the jewel, is here as well. Within this Shikon no Tama, Kagome will become eternally trapped in a battle with us. It is not possible to destroy the Shikon no Tama. The battle within the jewel will continue, and it will be pass into the hands of someone in the next world to make a wretched wish upon."
It will repeat forever. Its fate cannot be broken.
Inuyasha: "Don't lose, Kagome! Wait until I get there!"
It ends with a back shot of Kagome crying.
inuhanyounikkie
May. 25th, 2008 09:07 pm (UTC)
I like your translation better.... sighs... I left what I found on IJ
knittingknots
May. 25th, 2008 09:48 pm (UTC)
I do believe I see a buildup to some I/K fluff....(crossing fingers since it's near the end of the story....) Inu hates, hates when Kagome cries....
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  • 8 Sep 2015, 13:40
    Does the story still lives? It's been a while since your last chap :/
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    Hi knittingknots,
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    Wow, congrats!! It's been about that long since I've updated some of my fics, LOL.
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